DEDICATION To you, the writers who read my blog, who share your questions and ideas, who explore with me and with each other the intricacies of writing stories and poems. How grateful I am to have your company! Thanks to all on the blog who charged in with suggestions for the subtitle of this book. Extra-special thanks to Erica Eliza Smith for coming up with the actual, perfect subtitle! CONTENTS Dedication SECTION ONE: Being a Writer 1. Writers’ Advice Column 2. The Spark 3. Drops of Blood SECTION TWO: Character Building 4. The Depths 5. Character Cogitation 6. Fear of Flat 7. Use Your Words 8. The Outward Show 9. Here We Are SECTION THREE: Character Nitty-Gritty 10. Like Me! 11. To Change or Not to Change 12. Villainy 13. Creature Creation 14. Creature Country 15. Love’s Labor Found SECTION FOUR: Hatching the Plot 16. Stirring the Plot 17. The Plot Thickens 18. Have at It 19. Nail-Biting 20. Plotting Along SECTION FIVE: Aspects of Story 21. Midstory Crisis 22. Looking Back 23. Peering Ahead 24. Mysterious 25. Stranger Than Fiction 26. Theme Park SECTION SIX: Underpinnings 27. Tense Choices 28. Word Grazing 29. Clarity and Gizoxing 30. The Writing and Publishing Clock SECTION SEVEN: Poetry Country 31. Write Your Story a Poem 32. Write a Story in a Poem 33. Poetry Flies the Flag of Freedom 34. Rhyme Time 35. Playing with the Poetry Deck 36. Come Again? 37. Listen! 38. M. E. SECTION EIGHT: Closing the Circle 39. On Blogging Back Ad About the Author Books by Gail Carson Levine Credits Copyright About the Publisher • SECTION ONE • Being a Writer • CHAPTER 1 • Writers’ Advice Column I n 2009 I started a new adventure, creating a blog—short essays, really—which I’d never done before. That I could do it is proof that if you write one kind of thing, you have a leg up on writing another. When I began, I didn’t know what I’d talk about. This is from the first paragraph of my first post: “Fear of the blank blog is as bad as fear of the blank page. For my blogging life, I intend to post once a week, and I will probably blog about writing, but I don’t know that for sure. I’ll see how it shapes up. If you are reading this, I would welcome a post to tell me what you’re interested in reading from me.” And people did. You’ll meet some of them here; their names are more various than in any baby-naming book. The blog became a writers’ advice column, as you can see for yourself if you care to go online: www.gailcarsonlevine.blogspot.com. From early days to today, readers posted questions and I posted responses that reflect my approach to writing. A discussion of the topic followed my answer as readers added comments and more questions. Soon I noticed that I was getting even deeper into the how-to of writing than I had in my first book on writing, Writing Magic, and I thought, There’s a book here. Except for the chapters on poetry, which I added because I love to read and write poems and to teach poetry writing to kids, this book is the blog’s greatest hits, according to me, rearranged and sometimes expanded. I’ve loved hearing from other writers—some experienced, some beginners. If you’re reading this book and you’ve chimed in on the blog, thank you! I’ve especially enjoyed the mutual support in your replies to each other. Soon after this book is published, the blog will celebrate its sixth birthday. When I assembled all my posts, the result was over 450 single-spaced pages, more than twice as long as any of my novels. There’s a lot to say about writing stories. A lot, because people tell stories constantly. We are forever shaping what happens to us into anecdotes and sometimes into grand sagas. If we can tell a good spoken story, we cast a spell over our listeners, who forget where they are and the people they’re with. Instead, they picture the characters, real or imaginary, who populate our story. Our audience may be in our bedroom or on a busy street, but the scenery recedes and is replaced by the setting of our tale, which may just be somebody else’s bedroom or a different busy street, or it may be an island in the middle of a stormy sea or a castle clinging to the side of a mountain. When we write the story down, we weave the magic tighter. The more powerful our writing, the more fully we’ll bring a reader into our wizardry. That’s what this book is for—to make the enchantment binding. With a little help from Shakespeare’s witches in Macbeth, I wrote a writers’ spell poem: Mutter, mutter, dream and ponder; Writer writes and fingers flutter. Starting words of a startling tale, On the paper, laugh or wail, Days of joy and weeks of woe, Mountains high and vales below, Hero’s hope, villain’s might, Evil’s plot, virtue bright. With this spell of flash and thunder, In a vision, write the wonder. As I’ve been writing this book, I’ve made a habit of starting work by rereading this spell, and sometimes I say it out loud. You can too! Try reading or reciting it when you begin. A quick ritual can slide you into your concentration zone. In a moment we’re going to begin to write, but first, a few words about the writing prompts in these pages. They’re just jumping-off points; don’t feel you have to be faithful to them. You can change as much as you like: the names of the characters, the setting, the action—anything. Whatever you write from my prompts belongs entirely to you. If an editor should want to publish a story you wrote based on one, you don’t need my permission to go ahead. Naturally I’d like to hear about your triumph on my blog or my website, and I will be mighty proud of you. Now, let’s do it. Writing time! Try these: • Pick an object in your house—could be the stove, your violin, your grandmother’s running shoes, a parent’s computer. Anything! Separate it in your mind from its real history and invent a history for it. Think of the drama, the tragedy, the comedy that went into its creation, its passage from owner to owner, its effect on their lives and maybe even their deaths. Write the history as a story. • Pick a different object, which can be from your house again or your yard or the supermarket—anywhere!—and move it in your mind to a far-off location: a desert, the bottom of the ocean, the surface of an as-yet- undiscovered planet, the cellar of a castle in a fantasy kingdom. Write a story about how it got there and how it was discovered or rediscovered. • Give either object a magical property and write a story about how it became magical, who knows about the magic, what purposes its magic can serve. Invent characters who need the object for their virtuous or nefarious purposes. Have fun, and save what you write, whatever you write! Almost every chapter in this book ends with these two commands: Have fun, and save what you write! I have reasons for issuing them. Let’s start with the first command. Writing isn’t always pleasurable, even for people who love to write. Sometimes ideas flee to another galaxy and won’t come back. Sometimes the perfect words evaporate. Have fun is a reminder of why we write: to explore ideas, to follow a story, to find out what our characters will do, to entertain ourselves and our readers. The fate of planet Earth doesn’t hang in the balance. We can loosen up, relax, even have fun. Save what you write is important! When you save your work, you show yourself that you respect and value your efforts, even if you hate what you just wrote, even if it embarrasses you. Keeping your writing means you’re building a body of work. Story fragments are a resource you can mine. Finished stories are trophies. You can look back at them—and at your unfinished attempts—to chart your progress. Don’t rip up your pages or turn them into a bonfire or hit delete! The consequence, sooner or later, will be regret. Pity your future biographers, who will pore over your every phrase and write dissertations on the scene you saved even though you cut it from your third novel. Remember this about saving if you write on a computer: your writing should also be backed up somewhere, in case the computer crashes. You can’t save it if you lose it. Those are the commands. These are the rules. They appeared in Writing Magic, and they still apply. Here they are again: 1. The best way to write better is to write more. 2. The best way to write better is to write more. 3. The best way to write better is to write more. 4. The best way to write more is to write whenever you have five minutes and wherever you find a chair and a pen and paper or your computer. 5. Read! 6. Reread! There’s nothing wrong with reading a book you love over and over. When you do, the words get inside you, become part of you, in a way that words in a book you’ve read only once can’t. 7. Save everything you write, whether you like it or not.